Fic: Ten More Tidbits - Round 7
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Notes. Round 7 back in normal text. Only thirty more words for each until we're done. Not sure if I'm happy or sad about that...
Angst:
“Shaun, what the...?”
“Zach, wait! He's not what you think!”
“Really? You're tongue down his throat tells me different.”
(pleading) “Zach...”
“Get the fuck out.”
“Him? He's already gone.”
(voice breaking) “No...you.”
“Babe…”
“No! You don’t get to call me that anymore!”
“It was only a kiss!”
“Only? To me…they’re everything.”
(snorts) “Hard to tell. Your always with her.”
“She needs me.”
“I need you. Always have.”
“Not like this. She’s dying.”
au:
“Nice painting. Zach, isn't it?”
“Yeah, Professor Andrews. That's me.”
“Interesting subject. What do you call it?”
“My other half.”
“Oh. Is it missing...your other half?”
“Nope. Not anymore.”
“Was it missing?”
“No…well, yeah. Actually, I was missing.”
“So, who found you?”
“A really great guy.”
“Who?”
(blushing) “You.”
“ Then I guess you owe me dinner.”
“It’s a date.”
“Where should we go?”
“I know a place.”
“Where?”
“Home.”
first time:
“I'll make it so good for you.”
“You already have.”
“Sure you're ready for this?”
“Surer than I've ever been.”
“So, which first? Top or bottom?”
“Either. Both. Just...now!”
“Whoa…slow down, Babe. There’s no rush.”
“Feels like it.”
“Ohhh, you’ve been waiting for this?”
“Only my whole life.”
“So, is it as good as you thought?”
“Nope.” (pause for a kiss) “Better.”
“Good. I’d hate to disappoint you.”
“Totally impossible. It’s perfect.”
fluff:
“It's Pancake Day!”
(just waking up) “Huh?”
“We made you breakfast in bed!”
“Wow! These look really...interesting.”
“Yeah...wait 'til you taste them.”
“I have to eat them?”
“If I do, you do.”
“Okay, here we go.” (chews) “They’re crunchy!”
“Cody cracked the eggs.”
“How are they, Uncle Shaun?”
(grimacing) “Best pancakes I’ve ever had!”
“Good! Then I’ll go get some more!”
(in unison) “No, Cody, wait!”
(crestfallen) “Don’t you want more?”
“Sure we do. Bring ‘em all.”
humor:
“Gabe?!”
“Don't laugh, man. Just help me get it off!”
“Off? Dude, how the hell didja even get it on?”
“Easy. Lots of beer inside and lots of lube outside.”
“Dude, if you’re going to try the gay sex toys…”
“I wasn’t trying…I was researching.”
“For what? A test?”
(mumbling) “No…you just make it look like fun.”
“You watch?!”
“Not every time.”
“Dude!”
“What? I didn’t watch yesterday!”
“Dude!”
hurt/comfort:
“Ouch! Does it hurt much?”
“Not now that you're here.”
“No more skating blind-folded, okay?”
“Deal. (hesitates) Will you kiss it?”
“Where? You're all...bandaged.”
“Not all. This part is free.”
“Man, I hope so. Hate for that to get hurt.”
“Dude, you think I’d be skating with that hanging out?”
“Sometimes I wonder.”
“Well don’t. That’s yours. It’s always safe.”
(wiggles eyebrows) “Not always. Right now, it’s in danger of being attacked.”
smut:
“Holy shit, you're tight.”
“So good, Shaun...you're so good.”
“Zach...God...I'm so close.”
“Oh fuck, Shaun...right there!”
“There?”
“Again!”
“Like that?”
“Harder! Deeper!”
“Fuck, Zach...gonna come...”
“Give it to me, give it all to me…”
“Zach!”
“I’m right there with you…”
(Shaun, gasping) “Oh, holy shit…holy fuck…”
“That’s it, baby. Ride it out.”
“Yes! Oh, fuck yes!”
“So…good?”
“Holy shit…think I threw my back out.”
unresolved sexual tension:
“I gotta go.”
“Wait, just one more...”
“I gotta go.”
“When will I see you again?”
“I don't know.” (walks away) “Late.”
(grabs arm) “What are you afraid of?”
“I'm not afraid.” (whispers) “I'm terrified.”
“ Of what? Me?”
“No, of what you make me feel.”
“How do I make you feel? Wanted? Desired? Loved?”
“Alive.”
“And that’s a bad thing?”
“No, just a new thing.”
“Then stick around until it’s an old thing.”
“I…” (searches eyes. Swallows. Whispers.) “Okay.”
missing scene:
“Will you help me?”
“Of course.”
“Why?”
“I love you.”
“Really? Are you sure?”
“Yep.”
“Sure-sure?”
“Yep.”
“Me too.”
“Say it.”
“Shaun...”
“Please. Just once.”
(swallowing, serious, heartfelt) “I love you, Shaun.”
“Love you, too, Zach. Never stopped.”
“Good. Don’t ever stop.”
“Now what? Move to LA with me?”
“Uhm, about that…”
(scared) “Don’t you want to?”
“Yes…but it’s not just me.”
“Who else? Not Jeanne…”
“No. Cody.”
“Cody? Cool! Bring him!”
Point of view:
Shaun: “So glad you came back.”
Zach: “So glad you let me.”
Shaun: “Will you stay?”
Zach: (smiling) “Yeah. You're where I'm meant to be.”
Shaun: “I'll never let go, you know.”
Zach: “I'm counting on it.”
Shaun: “You’re so much more than you know.”
Zach: “I am now.”
Shaun: “So proud of you.”
Zach: “I can’t do this without you.”
Shaun: “You don’t have to. I’m here.”
Zach: “I don’t deserve you.”
(laughing) “Maybe not. But I do know we deserve each other.”
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Date: 2009-01-29 02:30 am (UTC)And missing scene gets a 'God, Shaun is so amazing I love him yay!!!'
Love you too, and all these fics!
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Date: 2009-01-29 02:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-29 02:37 am (UTC)And Damn! Why is it I like the idea of Gabe watching?!?!? I am one sick puppy! :-D
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Date: 2009-01-29 03:26 am (UTC)Chelle
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Date: 2009-01-29 06:44 am (UTC)Haha..Totally love the idea of Gabe watching them. *Wondering* Not quite sure why. God, am I a pervert? Maybe... ;o) Now I just want to know why Gabe is watching them...
Still, I totally love these...
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Date: 2009-01-29 07:14 am (UTC)Now I'm assuming it's Jeanne who's dying...but I still don't get why Shaun would kiss another man, even if Zach has been away a lot. Please explain...
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Date: 2009-01-29 02:58 pm (UTC)But... who's dying?!
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Date: 2009-01-29 04:18 pm (UTC)“I need you. Always have.”
“Not like this. She’s dying.”
-WHAT? No…..**sobs**
au:
“Where should we go?”
“I know a place.”
“Where?”
“Home.”
-**thud** WOW….love this!!
first time:
“Good. I’d hate to disappoint you.”
“Totally impossible. It’s perfect.”
-Aww, so sweet.
fluff:
(crestfallen) “Don’t you want more?”
“Sure we do. Bring ‘em all.”
-Aww, they’d do anything to make Codes happy..**melts**
humor:
“Not every time.”
“Dude!”
“What? I didn’t watch yesterday!”
“Dude!”
-OMFG!! Lolololololol! Gabe is freaking awesome!!! Mooooooore of this, please!!
hurt/comfort:
(wiggles eyebrows) “Not always. Right now, it’s in danger of being attacked.”
-Aww, so funny and sweet.
smut:
“So…good?”
“Holy shit…think I threw my back out.”
-lol!! Yeah, me too, kind of….**rolls eyes**
unresolved sexual tension:
“Then stick around until it’s an old thing.”
“I…” (searches eyes. Swallows. Whispers.) “Okay.”
-God, maybe this is my favorite among the ten options. Just BEAUTIFUL and moving. Love EVERY word here. I adore Shaun line, and then that “searches eyes. Swallows. Whispers”….Give me goose bumps. So damn sweet.
missing scene:
“Who else? Not Jeanne…”
“No. Cody.”
“Cody? Cool! Bring him!”
-LOVE YOU SHAUN!!! **Tammy jumps Shaun and do wicked things to him**
Point of view:
(laughing) “Maybe not. But I do know we deserve each other.”
-Wanna marry with me, PLEASE, Shaun?
Awesome job, babe. I’m at your feet here. Don’t you ever stop!!!
Lots of love and hugs.
Tammy.
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Date: 2009-01-29 06:25 pm (UTC)