shelter part 1

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 this is the whole story of the film in a different way its bits and pieces of the story that i loved and in the minds of Zach and Shaun, like what did they think when they saw each other for the first time in years and stuff like that.

pg/pg13 for now

There was this young kid in his early 20’s I would say; he was an artist and a loner. His name was Zach and all day and night all he would do is skateboard, surf, or draw.
Zach would always skateboard around his neighborhood and spray paint different pictures of bridges or cranes, on sides of buildings or walls, Zach did this as his tag to let people know that he was there.

Zach had a girlfriend that he would see from time to time, whenever he felt horny or whenever he just felt like hanging out with her.
Zack’s girlfriends name was Tara and Zack and Tara were boy and girl friends for years. If they weren’t going out with one another they would have been best friends.Another thing you all should know about is Zach’s family life.
Zach’s mom had passed away some years earlier and she left Jeanne, Zack’s sister to take care of her young son, Cody, alone as with Zack and their father. Their father was an alcoholic and had bi-polar after his wife passed away. Jeanne became somewhat depressed after the death of her boyfriend, Cody’s father.

Most of the time Zach had to take care of Cody, he had to watch Cody whenever Jeanne had wild and crazy and loud parties all hours of the night. Sometimes these parties would end up to be sex parties where Jeanne would mess around with her boyfriend, Al and another woman.
Zack didn’t mind taking care of Cody. Zack loved Cody as if he was his own son. One day while Zach and Cody were at a super market waiting for Jeanne to come out of work Cody turns around while seating on a bench outside and faces Zach and looks him dead in the eyes and asks “Zach are you my dad?”

Just hearing that broke Zach’s heart. Zach replied with “No Cody, I’m your uncle. Your mom is my sister.”  Cody came back with “No you’re my dad, you’re my dad, you’re my dad,” with that Zach had a huge smile.

The house that Zach, Cody, and Jeanne lived in was in the getto side of San Pedro California, so Zach always liked to call it. The house was very small and was falling about.

Zach had one best friend his name was Gabe. They had been friends as long has Zach was going out with Tara, the only thing was Gabe was after Tara for himself so once and awhile Gabe would ask Zach if he was still banging that chick, Zach would never answer his friend. Gabe was the complete opposite of Zach. One thing that was different about Gabe was that he had money. He had two mansions. He had a summer home with about ten bedrooms in it and another house he spent most of the time at his other mansion with his parents. Gabe had an older brother named Shawn that never came around to either of the mansions since he was in a relationship and lived with his partner. Sooner than later something happens between Zach and Shawn, stay tuned to see what that something is.Since I let everyone know about the characters of Jeanne, Zach, Cody, Gabe, and Shawn let me start the story as starts in the movie.

Zach was in his house trying to wake up his father who was dead to the world with a bottle of rum in his hand“Hey dad come on wake up take your meds,” said Zach handing his father his pills. His father took the pills and fell back to sleep.
Jeanne walked in the door and threw a pack of cigarettes at his father.

“Hey Zach,” said Jeanne walking over to Zach in a serious tone of voice.
“What is it Jeanne?” asked Zach frustrated
“I’m going out with Al tonight, can you watch Cody for me?”
“I was going to meet up with Gabe, he’s leaving tonight.”
“Can you take Cody with you please.”
“Yeah, yeah,” said Zach out in one deep breath
“Hey Cody would you like to hang out with Gabe and me?”
”Yeah Gabe and Zach,” said an excited Cody.

Before Zach and Cody went to pick up Gabe Zach had to work he was a cook at a little diner. Everyone once in awhile Zach would look at Cody.

“Hey Cody”
“Hey Zach,” said Cody with a huge smile.

Later on Zach drove up into the drive through of Gabe’s mansion. Zach got out of the car and walked up to the front door of the mansion and rang the door bell. A few minutes past before Gabe walks out of his house

“Hey bro,” said Zach happily
“Hey bitch,” said Gabe grabbing Zach for a hug.
“Wanna go surfing for a bit?”
“I can’t got little Cody in back”
“Shit that sucks man”
“It’s not so bad, do you wanna go for a ride around before heading back to the airport?” asked Zach

“Sounds cool man lets go.” Zach and Gabe both walk to the car and get inside both of the man sit in the front. Coby was fast asleep.

After awhile of driving Gabe took out a joint from his pocket.

“Hey man you can’t do that shit in here with Cody” said Zach. Gabe looked st the back seat and Cody was still fast asleep.
“Don’t worry dude, he’s fast asleep”
“No I’m not” said Cody. Zach laughed.
“He likes to pull that shit on people said Zach
“So did you and Tara break up yet or what?” asked Gabe
“Shut up about that”

“Okay, okay,” said Gabe with a little laugh.
“Why don’t you go to a community college by us you can stay at our place, fuck San Pedro?” asked Gabe
“I can’t do that right now man, I have to help with the little man here”
”Yeah okay,” said Gabe with a laugh
“My scholarship was my ticket out of here, until everything happened with mom and dad and big sis with Cody”
“Yeah, I got it”

There was lots of talking between the two best friends about school and about the getto neighborhood that Zach lived there was tons of laughter between the two as well. You can really tell that they were best friends from way back with the way they would tease each other.

Zach dropped off Gabe at the airport

“When are you coming over bitch you’ve only been up once in how many years. I’ll give you a plane ticket or something when you have the time” said Gabe.
“Yeah I’ll think about it thanks,” Zack and Gabe hug each other goodbye.
“Take it easy little guy,” said Gabe to Cody as he shook Cody’s hand.
“See ya Gabe,” with that said Gabe walked away and walked into the airport with some of his friends.

A little later on Zach went back to his and sisters house to drop off Cody.

“Hey, I’m out,” said Zach to his sister
“I thought you were staying” said Jeanne
“The waves are breaking hard”
“Okay be safe” said Jeanne. With that said Zach left the house.

Around an hour later Zach was at a beautiful beach with trees everywhere and rocks that people had to climb over. Another good thing about this beach was that hot guys were checking out Zach in his nice tight surf gear. They checked out his tight firm ass and his sweet package between his legs. The guys even checked him out from head to toe once he was done surfing and was dripping wet.

Zach didn’t know what was going on plus he didn’t pay no mind to it since he wasn’t gay.
The next day Zach snuck into Gabe’s mansion since he knew that no one was going to be there and since we knew the code to get inside. Zach was only there because he had left one of his surf boards there so since we was there with his board he decided to wax it up a little, all of a sudden Gabe’s older brother Shawn walked over to Zach, who he hadn’t seen in years and couldn’t help but stare. Shaun couldn’t believe how beautiful Zach turned out to be, Zach was just in a long take top and shorts but still Shaun couldn’t take his eyes off of him.

“I thought your ghetto ass would have stop breaking and entering by now,” said Shawn. Zach turned around with a huge smile on his face. Just seeing Zach smile was a turn on for Shaun. Shaun smiled back.

“Then change the code bitch,” said Zach laughing and then Shawn started laughing.
“What are you doing here man?” asked Shawn. Zach felt nervous around Shawn and couldn’t think of what to say.
“Um, I left my long board here,” said Zach pointing to his board.
“That’s cool man. How are you doing?” asked Shawn
“Good, good, and you?” asked Zach as Zach and Shawn shook hands.
“Good man, damn if feels good to be back. I haven’t seen you since your graduation, like five years, so tell me what have you been up to?”
“Nothing man, not a thing”
“Shit that sounds boring as hell,” said Shawn laughing. Zach just smiled.
“What are you doing here?”
“Just here for the weekend since the house is empty”
“I thought you hated it here?” asked Zach. Shawn just kept staring at Zach and smiling at Zach.
“ I missed the ocean”
“Dude, you live in L.A.”
“Yeah, but I hate surfing there.”
“Want to go?” asked Zach has he looked away from Shawn and at the ocean
“surfing?” with that Zach started laughing hard and smiling his boyish sexy smile at Shawn. Shawn smiling and laughing back.
“Yeah dude”
“I’m sure there’s a few things I can teach you,” said Shawn in a seductive tone of voice.
“Yeah right” with that said Shawn and Zach grabbed their boards, and ran to the shore.

 

 The two handsome men took their shirts off and ran into the water with their boards and caught some heavy and awesome waves. They surfed for about an hour before the sun was going down. The guys got out of the water, grabbed their shirts, sat against a rock. They were soaking wet and out of breath. They both dried off with towels.

“What an amazing time to go surfing” said Zach
“Yeah, prefect waves”
“Yeah, but I still should you a few moves or two”
“Hey I’m rusty haven’t done it in a while”
“Sure, you’re just an old man,” said Zach laughing in Shawn’s face. Shawn looked hurt from what Zach said but smiled at Zach.
“So where are you living now?” asked Shawn trying to change the subject
“I’m living with my sister Jeanne and her son Cody in San Pedro. I’m working at the center diner trying to save up some money to get my own place so that I can live near my father.”
“That’s great man”
“You think so”
“of course, a young man like yourself trying to help and be indepented at the same time, that’s awesome man.”
“Yeah you think so”
“Of course I do”
“Thanks man, that means a lot”

All of sudden Zach’s cell phone rang. Zach looked all over for the damn thing but it was covered with sand. Zach got it and answered it.

“Hey Jeanne what’s up?”
“Can you come home soon and watch Cody,” said Jeanne on the other side of the phone.
“Yeah sure, I’ll be there in a half an hour.” Zach got off the phone with his sister and got up from the sand.
“I’m sorry but I have to go. I have to watch Cody for my sister,” said Zach to Shawn.
“ Yeah man don’t worry about it, it was great hanging out with you.”
“Same here bro,” and with that said Zach was gone.

 

Comments

[brokeback1963.livejournal.com]

THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR THIS; no, REALLY, thank you so very much.

We have a big Shelter thread at the Ennisjack forum and we have been trying to write a script for so long, and here you go, with EVERYTHING, with added Shaun and Zach's thoughts too!!

This means a whole world for me; you have no idea!!

Much love.

Tammy.

thanks

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your welcome so so so much i just saw the movie a week ago and i just had to write this. this is the first fan fic i have ever written besides some QAF poetry.