Fic: Ten More Tidbits - Round 4
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fizzerbass Rating: Still "G" to soft "R"
Pairings: Same as the other three.
Notes: Round 4 is back in italics again. I'm thinking this would be cool if I could get ten rounds out of it. That way, each tidbit would be a true drabble in and of itself. Ya' think?
Angst:
“Shaun, what the...?”
“Zach, wait! He's not what you think!”
“Really? You're tongue down his throat tells me different.”
(pleading) “Zach...”
“Get the fuck out.”
“Him? He's already gone.”
(voice breaking) “No...you.”
“Babe…”
“No! You don’t get to call me that anymore!”
au:
“Nice painting. Zach, isn't it?”
“Yeah, Professor Andrews. That's me.”
“Interesting subject. What do you call it?”
“My other half.”
“Oh. Is it missing...your other half?”
“Nope. Not anymore.”
“Was it missing?”
“No…well, yeah. Actually, I was missing.”
first time:
“I'll make it so good for you.”
“You already have.”
“Sure you're ready for this?”
“Surer than I've ever been.”
“So, which first? Top or bottom?”
“Either. Both. Just...now!”
“Whoa…babe. There’s no rush.”
“I've waited too long already.”
fluff:
“It's Pancake Day!”
(just waking up) “Huh?”
“We made you breakfast in bed!”
“Wow! These look really...interesting.”
“Yeah...wait 'til you taste them.”
“I have to eat them?”
“If I do, you do.”
“Okay, here we go.” (chews) “They’re crunchy!”
“Cody cracked the eggs.”
humor:
“Gabe?!”
“Don't laugh, man. Just help me get it off!”
“Off? Dude, how the hell didja even get it on?”
“Easy. Lots of beer inside and lots of lube outside.”
“Dude, if you’re going to try the gay sex toys…”
hurt/comfort:
“Ouch! Does it hurt much?”
“Not now that you're here.”
“No more skating blind-folded, okay?”
“Deal. (hesitates) Will you kiss it?”
“Where? You're all...bandaged.”
“Not all. This part is free.”
“Man, I hope so. Hate for that to get hurt.”
smut:
“Holy shit, you're tight.”
“So good, Shaun...you're so good.”
“Zach...God...I'm so close.”
“Oh fuck, Shaun...right there!”
“There?”
“Again!”
“Like that?”
“Harder! Deeper!”
“Fuck, Zach...gonna come...”
“Give it to me, give it all to me…”
“Zach!”
unresolved sexual tension:
“I gotta go.”
“Wait, just one more...”
“I gotta go.”
“When will I see you again?”
“I don't know.” (walks away) “Late.”
(grabs arm) “What are you afraid of?”
“I'm not afraid.” (whispers) “I'm terrified.”
“ Of what? Me?”
“No, of what you make me feel.”
missing scene:
“Will you help me?”
“Of course.”
“Why?”
“I love you.”
“Really? Are you sure?”
“Yep.”
“Sure-sure?”
“Yep.”
“Me too.”
“Say it.”
“Shaun...”
“Please. Just once.”
(swallowing, serious, heartfelt) “I love you, Shaun.”
“Love you, too, Zach. Never stopped.”
“Good. Don’t ever stop.”
Point of view:
Shaun: “So glad you came back.”
Zach: “So glad you let me.”
Shaun: “Will you stay?”
Zach: (smiling) “Yeah. You're where I'm meant to be.”
Shaun: “I'll never let go, you know.”
Zach: “I'm counting on it.”
Shaun: “You’re so much more than you know.”
Zach: “I am now.”
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Date: 2009-01-26 02:56 am (UTC). . . (grabs arm) “What are you afraid of?”
“I'm not afraid.” (whispers) “I'm terrified.”
“ Of what? Me?”
“No, of what you make me feel.”
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Date: 2009-01-26 05:23 am (UTC)Please! I love this. :) This is the best one of these memes I've seen!
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Date: 2009-01-26 07:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-26 07:17 am (UTC)I must say that the angst bit really just caught my attention. Normally I'm not an angst-girl, but this one is just great. The first ten words are just so telling. I really just wanted you to write it into a fic, but a ficlet is the very next best thing. I really don't know how you manage to put that much in only ten words. You're really good at writing, and you're my hero right now :o)
Oh and I totally agree with scoutdaniels. The unresolved sexual tension bit is really good.
Oh and the other bits have also captured me. Actually I check the community several times a day yo se, if you have posted a new round. Yes, I'm hooked and I'm proud of it :oD
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Date: 2009-01-26 08:07 am (UTC)I had to laugh a pancake day and Gabe
and yeah ten rounds sounds good to me-LOL
Paula
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Date: 2009-01-26 08:35 am (UTC)But you're totally killing me with "Angst" now...
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Date: 2009-01-26 11:39 am (UTC)yes!*thumbs up*
angst is getting good.thanks.
Even more brilliance
Date: 2009-01-26 01:47 pm (UTC)Oh these are wonderful!! Yet another talent you have! As for writing 10 -yes please!!! (but I wonder if the boys have it in them to go 10 rounds in the smut category! They may be peaking too soon ;-)
Thanks so much!
Sx
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Date: 2009-01-26 03:20 pm (UTC)“Babe…”
“No! You don’t get to call me that anymore!”
-Oh God……This is so heartbreaking…..I can’t stand it.
au:
“Was it missing?”
“No…well, yeah. Actually, I was missing.”
-I really wanna know more!!
first time:
“Whoa…babe. There’s no rush.”
“I've waited too long already.”
-Awww, so delicious!!!
fluff:
“Okay, here we go.” (chews) “They’re crunchy!”
“Cody cracked the eggs.”
-LOLOLOL!!!! Be careful, dude, watch what you’re eating!!!
humor:
“Dude, if you’re going to try the gay sex toys…”
-Gabe just cracks me up!!!
hurt/comfort:
“Man, I hope so. Hate for that to get hurt.”
-SO cute!!!
smut:
“Give it to me, give it all to me…”
“Zach!”
-Fuck, Susan, I’m not gonna make it till the end if you keep on writing things like this!!! Freaking HOT….
unresolved sexual tension:
“ Of what? Me?”
“No, of what you make me feel.”
-Oh, WOW. Pretty breathtaking and moving. Just beautiful!!
missing scene:
“Love you, too, Zach. Never stopped.”
“Good. Don’t ever stop.”
-So sweet and gorgeous!!! **melts**
Point of view:
Shaun: “You’re so much more than you know.”
Zach: “I am now.”
-**smiling like a fool**
AWESOME, baby!!!! I’m really hooked here!!
You’re the best.
Love and big hugs.
Tammy.
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Date: 2009-01-26 03:24 pm (UTC)OMG I laughed so much reading about Gabe - he's such a hoot!
And I'm trying VERY hard to ignore the angst part - what are you doing?! *is worried*
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Date: 2009-01-27 12:15 am (UTC)Soda--check.
Watch--check.
Anxiously awaiting the next round--check.