Fic: Ten More Tidbits
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fizzerbass Rating: Same as before. G to soft R.
Pairings: As before.
Notes: Some of you very nicely asked for more. So here's more. Ten more words for each microfic. Hee! This is fun! (New stuff is in italics. Things in (parenthesis) don't count towards word count.)
Angst:
“Shaun, what the...?”
“Zach, wait! He's not what you think!”
“Really? You're tongue down his throat tells me different.”
(pleading) “Zach...”
au:
“Nice painting. Zach, isn't it?”
“Yeah, Professor Andrews. That's me.”
“Interesting subject. What do you call it?”
“My other half.”
first time:
“I'll make it so good for you.”
“You already have.”
“Sure you're ready for this?”
“Surer than I've ever been.”
fluff:
“It's Pancake Day!”
(just waking up) “Huh?”
“We made you breakfast in bed!”
“Wow! These look really...interesting.”
“Yeah...wait 'til you taste them.”
humor:
“Gabe?!”
“Don't laugh, man. Just help me get it off!”
“Off? Dude, how the hell didja even get it on?”
hurt/comfort:
“Ouch! Does it hurt much?”
“Not now that you're here.”
“No more skating blind-folded, okay?”
“Deal. (hesitates) Will you kiss it?”
smut:
“Holy shit, you're tight.”
“So good, Shaun...you're so good.”
“Zach...God...I'm so close.”
“Oh fuck, Shaun...right there!”
unresolved sexual tension:
“I gotta go.”
“Wait, just one more...”
“I gotta go.”
“When will I see you again?”
“I don't know.” (walks away) “Late.”
missing scene:
“Will you help me?”
“Of course.”
“Why?”
“I love you.”
“Really? Are you sure?”
“Yep.”
“Sure-sure?”
“Yep.”
“Me too.”
point of view:
Shaun: “So glad you came back.”
Zach: “So glad you let me.”
Shaun: “Will you stay?”
Zach: (smiling) “Yeah. You're where I'm meant to be.”
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Date: 2009-01-25 04:07 pm (UTC)I'm so glad you liked these and thanks for letting me know.
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Date: 2009-01-25 02:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-25 04:08 pm (UTC)(glad you want it, too! *smile*)
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Date: 2009-01-25 07:11 am (UTC)Now don't stop there. I still need to know what Gabe has on, and what the hell Shaun is doing in "Angst".
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Date: 2009-01-25 04:10 pm (UTC)Glad you're enjoying these as much as I am writing them! :)
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Date: 2009-01-25 10:10 am (UTC)i really liked them.thanks.
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Date: 2009-01-25 04:12 pm (UTC)So glad you liked these and thanks for letting me know!
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Date: 2009-01-25 10:51 am (UTC)Please? :D
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Date: 2009-01-25 04:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-01-25 12:46 pm (UTC)I need to know what the hell Shaun is up in "Angst". I can't believe he was kissing another guy. I'm gonna kick his ass. GGrrrr....Poor Zach.
I SO loved "hurt/comfort". It's so sweet. **melts** "Point of view" and "missing scene" are totally beautiful. I adore that "sure-sure?" Sooo cute; made me smile wide.
The new part of "humor" made me laugh. I want to know more and I want to see a pic of that too. Lol!! Gabe is amazing!!!
"First time" is so tender, and "smut"...well...**thud thud thud**
Really hooked here with "Au". MORE!!!
All them are gorgeous, babe. You're a genius.
Lots of love and huge hugs.
Tammy.
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Date: 2009-01-25 04:13 pm (UTC)So very glad you're enjoying these, girlfriend. Hope they're giving you as much joy to read them as I'm getting by writing them. :)