shelter part 2

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  here's part 2 of shelter please feel free to comment. 

I've added some extra dialogue as well as changed some of the dialogue  

PG/PG-13 for now

The following morning Zach met up with Shaun at the beach, the same spot where they talked with each other the night before this time they had surf gear on. They had just finished surfing and dripping wet they sat down and dried off a bit.

“How’s Jeanne doing?” asked Shaun
“Same I guess from what happened to our mom and then to Roy.”
“How’s your dad doing now a days?”
“Same too, he’s always in his moods either from too much liquor, not even of his meds, or too much of his meds.”
“Sorry to hear that dude.”
“Thanks”
“You’re one strong kid”
“I try to be, for everyone including Cody”
“You know I can’t picture Jeanne the mother type”
“Oh she’s not, I’m the mother, the father, and the uncle rolled into one”
“Shit, that must be tough?” asked Shaun
“No, I love Cody, he’s a great kid”
“He must be getting older now?”
“Yeah he’s five now. “

Zach and Shaun kept glancing at each other from time to time with smiles on their voices and every time they got caught looking at the other they would break out in laughter. All the laughter that was going on between the two were from nerves.

Later on that day Zach was putting his surf boards away in his fan. Zach turned around when he heard a woman’s voice say hey monkey. It was Zach’s girlfriend, Tori

“Hey monkey,” said Zach right before kissing Tori on the lips. Zach pulled away from Tori quickly.
“So what are you doing down here?” asked Zach to Tori.
“Just walking my dog on the beach”
“That’s cool.”

Tori  walked away and a few seconds later Shaun was by Zach’s side. Shaun was helping Zach get his Surf board in his van.

“Thanks”
“You’re welcome dude”
“Want to go out for some beers or something or are you taking off?” asked Zach
“No, I’ll grab a beer”
“Really?” asked Zach excited
“Yeah.”

Shaun walked away to play frisbee with Tori’s dog and Tori walked back to Zach. Both Zach and Tori where staring at Shaun.

“So, how did you get down here?” asked Zach to Tori
“Oh, Billy gave me a ride”
“Oh”
“Who’s that?” asked Tori about Shaun
“That’s Shaun”
“Gabe’s brother?” asked Tori in shock.
“Yeah”
“That’s cool”

Shaun turned around and threw a frisbee in Zach’s direction and Zach caught it. Shaun ran over to Zach and Tori.

“So are we going to have some beers or are you going to talk shit about me all night?” asked Shaun laughing, first looking at Zach and then to Tori. Shaun walked over to Tori. Shaun was smiling and chewing on a piece of gum, Shaun looked so sexy. Shaun had a shaved head, full red lips perfect teeth when he smiled, dark eyes, and a well built body including a nice tight ass.

“Hey, I’m Tori,” said Tori shaking Shaun’s hand.
“Yeah, I remember you. You were about 13 years old with messed up hair but I still remember you and I even bought you guys some wine coolers and you got sick at my parents place,” Shaun and Tori had a laugh with that one.
“You and Zach have been together for years”
“Yeah”
“How come you still deal with his shit?”
“No idea but we’re still here”

Zach kept on throwing the frisbee at Shaun while Shaun was talking to Tori. Shaun kept catching the frisbee and laughing.

“Right on,” said Shaun smiling and laughing.
“See ya later,” said Tori and then she was gone.

Shaun walked over to where Zach was and for a few hours after all they did was play frisbee.

Later on, on the beach Zach and Shaun had a party with some of Gabe’s friends. Shaun and Zach were sitting next to each other with their knees touching.

“So Shaun, you’re Gabe’s brother?” asked Billy, a friend of Tori’s
“Yeah.”
“I heard you went all Hollywood and shit”
“Not quit”
“So Zach still with Tori?” asked Billy
“Yeah kinda”
“Come on dude, she’s freaking hot man. I’ll take her if you don’t want her. What are you any way are you a fag or something?” with that remark Shaun left the party and Zach followed.
“Storms coming in” said Zach not sure what else to say
“Yeah” said Shaun
“It was nice seeing Tori” said Shaun
“Yeah, I bet”
“You guys have been together for years”
“Yeah well she’s like my best friend besides Gabe. Tori and I are taking a little break right now”
“Oh” said Shaun

Both Zach and Shaun were drinking cans of beer.

“So are you dating anyone?” asked Zach as he turned around and faced Shaun.
“No, we just broke up,” said Shaun sounding depressed
“Really?”
“Yeah”
“Is that why you’re really down here?” asked Zach
“No, no, no. Yeah it is,” said Shaun laughing. Zach looked at Shaun and laughed to.
“I just moved out of our place and my lease doesn’t start until the end of the month.”
“That’s cool”

Zach’s cell phone was ringing; he got it out of his jacket pocket and checked who it was.

“Sorry have to answer it,” said Zach to Shaun

“Hey Zach it’s Jeanne, can you please pick up Cody, we’re at Alan’s place,” said Jeanne on the other end of the phone.
“I thought we weren’t going to leave him over there.
“I know but something came up. Can you please pick Cody up?” asked Jeanne.
“Yeah, I’ll be there in a little bit.”
“Thanks,” and with that Jeanne hung up the phone.
“Sorry dude, I gotta go, have to pick up Cody.”
“It’s okay man, I can find someone to drive me back.”
“It was great hanging out with you these couple of days,” said Zach staring at Shaun.
“Yeah same here man,” said Shaun shaking Zach’s hand. Zach walked away from Shaun but not before taking one last hard look at Shaun. Shaun turned around and watched Zach walk off.

 

Comments

[sammynce.livejournal.com]

Thanks a lot for this
I'm french and even if i understand well english some part was a little harder to catch
Thanks

[qafluver.livejournal.com]

your welcome