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[slpdprvdtchy.livejournal.com]

So I figured after reading everyone's wonderful stories, I'd give it a shot to write one of mine. Anyone have any suggestions on where to get help with editing. I don't think my husband would feel comfortable fielding this one, and he's usually my "go to guy" for grammar.

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[slpdprvdtchy.livejournal.com]

I wrote a first person POV for a first time experience. Lot's of inner monologue type conversations. I'm not even sure if it's worth getting a beta. Kinda chickening out! lol! I wrote it on google docs, so I guess I could share it with you if you want an easy way to read it.

[frogy.livejournal.com]

That's not typically my forte, but I'll look at it if you want.

[slpdprvdtchy.livejournal.com]

It might be real shit! lol! How do you want me to get it to you?