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shelter_diner2009-01-27 09:24 pm
Fic: Ten More Tidbits - Round 6
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fizzerbass Ratings: Still G to R
Pairings: Still the four boys we love: Zach, Shaun, Cody and Gabe
Notes: Okay, okay, okay. I toned Angst down a bit because I did not want to give half the fandom a heart attack. However, I reserve the right to let my evil little mind pick up that sick puppy and run with it at a future date. *evil grin* Thanks for your feedback, guys...you rock my little world right off it's axis. Round 6 in italics.
Angst:
“Shaun, what the...?”
“Zach, wait! He's not what you think!”
“Really? You're tongue down his throat tells me different.”
(pleading) “Zach...”
“Get the fuck out.”
“Him? He's already gone.”
(voice breaking) “No...you.”
“Babe…”
“No! You don’t get to call me that anymore!”
“It was only a kiss!”
“Only? To me…they’re everything.”
(snorts) “Hard to tell. Your always with her.”
“She needs me.”
au:
“Nice painting. Zach, isn't it?”
“Yeah, Professor Andrews. That's me.”
“Interesting subject. What do you call it?”
“My other half.”
“Oh. Is it missing...your other half?”
“Nope. Not anymore.”
“Was it missing?”
“No…well, yeah. Actually, I was missing.”
“So, who found you?”
“A really great guy.”
“Who?”
(blushing) “You.”
“ Then I guess you owe me dinner.”
“It’s a date.”
first time:
“I'll make it so good for you.”
“You already have.”
“Sure you're ready for this?”
“Surer than I've ever been.”
“So, which first? Top or bottom?”
“Either. Both. Just...now!”
“Whoa…slow down, Babe. There’s no rush.”
“Feels like it.”
“Ohhh, you’ve been waiting for this?”
“Only my whole life.”
“So, is it as good as you thought?”
“Nope.” (pause for a kiss) “Better.”
fluff:
“It's Pancake Day!”
(just waking up) “Huh?”
“We made you breakfast in bed!”
“Wow! These look really...interesting.”
“Yeah...wait 'til you taste them.”
“I have to eat them?”
“If I do, you do.”
“Okay, here we go.” (chews) “They’re crunchy!”
“Cody cracked the eggs.”
“How are they, Uncle Shaun?”
(grimacing) “Best pancakes I’ve ever had!”
“Good! Then I’ll go get some more!”
(in unison) “No, Cody, wait!”
humor:
“Gabe?!”
“Don't laugh, man. Just help me get it off!”
“Off? Dude, how the hell didja even get it on?”
“Easy. Lots of beer inside and lots of lube outside.”
“Dude, if you’re going to try the gay sex toys…”
“I wasn’t trying…I was researching.”
“For what? A test?”
(mumbling) “No…you just make it look like fun.”
“You watch?!”
hurt/comfort:
“Ouch! Does it hurt much?”
“Not now that you're here.”
“No more skating blind-folded, okay?”
“Deal. (hesitates) Will you kiss it?”
“Where? You're all...bandaged.”
“Not all. This part is free.”
“Man, I hope so. Hate for that to get hurt.”
“Dude, you think I’d be skating with that hanging out?”
“Sometimes I wonder.”
“Well don’t. That’s yours. It’s always safe.”
smut:
“Holy shit, you're tight.”
“So good, Shaun...you're so good.”
“Zach...God...I'm so close.”
“Oh fuck, Shaun...right there!”
“There?”
“Again!”
“Like that?”
“Harder! Deeper!”
“Fuck, Zach...gonna come...”
“Give it to me, give it all to me…”
“Zach!”
“I’m right there with you…”
(Shaun, gasping) “Oh, holy shit…holy fuck…”
“That’s it, baby. Ride it out.”
“Yes! Oh, fuck yes!”
unresolved sexual tension:
“I gotta go.”
“Wait, just one more...”
“I gotta go.”
“When will I see you again?”
“I don't know.” (walks away) “Late.”
(grabs arm) “What are you afraid of?”
“I'm not afraid.” (whispers) “I'm terrified.”
“ Of what? Me?”
“No, of what you make me feel.”
“How do I make you feel? Wanted? Desired? Loved?”
“Alive.”
“And that’s a bad thing?”
“No, just a new thing.”
missing scene:
“Will you help me?”
“Of course.”
“Why?”
“I love you.”
“Really? Are you sure?”
“Yep.”
“Sure-sure?”
“Yep.”
“Me too.”
“Say it.”
“Shaun...”
“Please. Just once.”
(swallowing, serious, heartfelt) “I love you, Shaun.”
“Love you, too, Zach. Never stopped.”
“Good. Don’t ever stop.”
“Now what? Move to LA with me?”
“Uhm, about that…”
(scared) “Don’t you want to?”
“Yes…but it’s not just me.”
Point of view:
Shaun: “So glad you came back.”
Zach: “So glad you let me.”
Shaun: “Will you stay?”
Zach: (smiling) “Yeah. You're where I'm meant to be.”
Shaun: “I'll never let go, you know.”
Zach: “I'm counting on it.”
Shaun: “You’re so much more than you know.”
Zach: “I am now.”
Shaun: “So proud of you.”
Zach: “I can’t do this without you.”
Shaun: “You don’t have to. I’m here.”
Zach: “I don’t deserve you.”
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Chelle
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Please fix it...I'm not above begging...
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Wow, I didn't se that coming in the angst bit. Now I just wonder who "she" is... Looking forward to a story continuing the angst part. But I just hope it has a happy ending. I'm a sucker for happy endings :o)
Ohhh the AU bit is getting very interesting. I would really like to read a story about Zach and professor Andrews. Could be really, really nice...
Haha... The humor bit just makes me laugh. I guess Gabe is just full of surprises, huh? ;o)
Keep up the very good work
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Can't wait for 7!
Sxxx
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(snorts) “Hard to tell. Your always with her.”
“She needs me.”
-Who the hell needs you more than Shaun, huh? Oh man, this is tearing me apart….**sobs**
au:
“ Then I guess you owe me dinner.”
“It’s a date.”
-Oh, **squeeeeeee** This one is amazing!! Wanna read about that date!!
first time:
“So, is it as good as you thought?”
“Nope.” (pause for a kiss) “Better.”
-Aww…**melts** Beautiful.
fluff:
“Good! Then I’ll go get some more!”
(in unison) “No, Cody, wait!”
-lol!!! That happens when we lie…..**rolls eyes**
humor:
(mumbling) “No…you just make it look like fun.”
“You watch?!”
- WHAT? **thud thud thud** LMAO!!!! I NEED to read more!!!!
hurt/comfort:
“Sometimes I wonder.”
“Well don’t. That’s yours. It’s always safe.”
- So sweet. “That’s yours”. Aww, Zach, babe….**melts**
smut:
“That’s it, baby. Ride it out.”
“Yes! Oh, fuck yes!”
-Fuck yes, indeed…..**drools like a dog**
unresolved sexual tension:
“And that’s a bad thing?”
“No, just a new thing.”
-**sigh** Glad to see Zach doesn’t think that his love for Shaun is a bad thing….
missing scene:
(scared) “Don’t you want to?”
“Yes…but it’s not just me.”
-Little Codes too, Papi Shaun!!! I love this family.
Point of view:
Shaun: “You don’t have to. I’m here.”
Zach: “I don’t deserve you.”
-God, that’s moving……
I’m SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad you’re writing more of this. I love it, Susan, and now all the fandom in doing the same thanks to you. **claps**
Love you!!
Tammy.
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promisedwant to write it some other time I can wait. :DAnd OMG GABE! lolololol