Girl, you sure are a miracle or something like that!! How the hell do you do it ALL THE TIME? I’m so amazed and sooooooooooo happy you’re here!!! **claps widly**
This is so special and adorable. I was smiling and even laughing so hard the whole time, and then the ending hit me, because I didn’t expect that so powerful and beautiful word “mine” and it melted my heart with all its delicious sweetness.
I know I say to you this every time, but Susan, this was so Shaun and Zach!! I mean, you really are their voices; they sound so real and true to me, so Shelter. I could quote every word they said because they were pure perfection.
** “Hey there!” He tousles Cody’s hair playfully and rubs Beaner’s head. “How are my two most favorite ankle-biters today?”
Cody laughs and puts the dog on the floor before launching himself into Shaun’s arms. “I don’t bite your ankles, Shaun, and neither does Beaner.”
Shaun jostles Cody in his arms, pretending to almost drop the boy and making him giggle uncontrollably in the process. “Are you sure? Sure-sure? ‘Cause somebody around here sure has been chewing on my ankles lately. Who can that be, I wonder?”
Cody laughs and twists in Shaun’s embrace to point at Zach.
“Me?” Zach puts the groceries on the counter, his eyes opened wide in mock-shock. “I’m not an ankle-biter!” He turns quickly and lunges for Cody, wriggling his fingers like dancing spiders. “I’m a tummy-tickler!”
Cody squeals and wriggles in Shaun’s arms as Zach tickles him without mercy. Shaun gets into the act and the three laughing fools end up in a pile on the floor, Beaner barking and jumping like puppet on a string around their tangled bodies. ** “Hey, babe. Have a good time at the beach?” ** Shaun comes up behind Zach, slipping his arms around his waist and trapping him against the counter. “I was cooking…” he kisses the side of Zach’s neck. “And then I was writing…” he pulls his head around to kiss the other side. “And now I’m trying to get a proper kiss hello from my sexy, hot boyfriend.”
Zach turns, wrapping his arms around Shaun’s shoulders as he brings their lips together. Shaun moans lightly, digging his fingers into Zach’s waist as Zach hooks an ankle around Shaun’s calf to pull them closer together. They’re both starting to breath hard, fingers searching for and slipping under clothes to find smooth skin… ** Shaun looks up from where he’s closing down his laptop. “But you’re so cute when you blush, I can’t help it.”
Zach narrows his eyes and throws a loaf of bread at Shaun. “Shut up, dude, or I really will bite your ankles.” ** Zach snorts. “Nice nickname, dude.”
“Oh, this from the man who spent more than five years of his life answering to ‘Monkey’?” **
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Date: 2008-11-16 05:52 pm (UTC)This is so special and adorable. I was smiling and even laughing so hard the whole time, and then the ending hit me, because I didn’t expect that so powerful and beautiful word “mine” and it melted my heart with all its delicious sweetness.
I know I say to you this every time, but Susan, this was so Shaun and Zach!! I mean, you really are their voices; they sound so real and true to me, so Shelter. I could quote every word they said because they were pure perfection.
**
“Hey there!” He tousles Cody’s hair playfully and rubs Beaner’s head. “How are my two most favorite ankle-biters today?”
Cody laughs and puts the dog on the floor before launching himself into Shaun’s arms. “I don’t bite your ankles, Shaun, and neither does Beaner.”
Shaun jostles Cody in his arms, pretending to almost drop the boy and making him giggle uncontrollably in the process. “Are you sure? Sure-sure? ‘Cause somebody around here sure has been chewing on my ankles lately. Who can that be, I wonder?”
Cody laughs and twists in Shaun’s embrace to point at Zach.
“Me?” Zach puts the groceries on the counter, his eyes opened wide in mock-shock. “I’m not an ankle-biter!” He turns quickly and lunges for Cody, wriggling his fingers like dancing spiders. “I’m a tummy-tickler!”
Cody squeals and wriggles in Shaun’s arms as Zach tickles him without mercy. Shaun gets into the act and the three laughing fools end up in a pile on the floor, Beaner barking and jumping like puppet on a string around their tangled bodies.
**
“Hey, babe. Have a good time at the beach?”
**
Shaun comes up behind Zach, slipping his arms around his waist and trapping him against the counter. “I was cooking…” he kisses the side of Zach’s neck. “And then I was writing…” he pulls his head around to kiss the other side. “And now I’m trying to get a proper kiss hello from my sexy, hot boyfriend.”
Zach turns, wrapping his arms around Shaun’s shoulders as he brings their lips together. Shaun moans lightly, digging his fingers into Zach’s waist as Zach hooks an ankle around Shaun’s calf to pull them closer together. They’re both starting to breath hard, fingers searching for and slipping under clothes to find smooth skin…
**
Shaun looks up from where he’s closing down his laptop. “But you’re so cute when you blush, I can’t help it.”
Zach narrows his eyes and throws a loaf of bread at Shaun. “Shut up, dude, or I really will bite your ankles.”
**
Zach snorts. “Nice nickname, dude.”
“Oh, this from the man who spent more than five years of his life answering to ‘Monkey’?”
**