Shelter Diner

Hey there:) Just wanted to say that I liked this fic, it was easy going and the sex scene wasn't that bad but hmm normally you put the lube in your fingers to ease the way, not after and it should go to Shaun's dick, not Zach's ass. Well, at least I think so. But it didn't bother me all that much. Only two little things bothered me in this ficlet. One is COdy's supposed feelings of rivarly against his brother. He's the sweetest child and we saw in the movie that although he wanted some things, once he knew he couldn't have them he didn't really insist. But I guess that for the sake of this story I'll have to put it up:):):) The other thing that bothered me was Gabe's characterization in the fics. His attitude, in my opinion, borders on apathy and even if it doesn't seem like it, Gabe can have some deep thoughts and profounds comments. The only time I liked Gabe here was when he was all shy when Zach thanked him for the t-shirts... The fic was nice over-all so don't think I didn't like it:) hope u won't be too mad at me:)